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A Twenty-First Century "Guide for the Perplexed
DAVID SHADDOCK
Copyright © 2002 Poetry Flash

 MINDING THE DARKNESS: A Poem for the Year 2000, by Peter Dale Scott, New Directions, New York, New York, 2000, 254 pages, $21.95 paper.

Having busted a few undergraduate teeth on Yeats's A Vision, with its theory that history moves in thousand year cycles, I was prepared to look for some significance in the end of the century and the turning of the millennium. When nothing happened but fireworks, banal speeches, and putative computer bugs, I decided to write it off as a complete non-event, a mere artifice of the Roman Calendar. But the events of September 11, 2001, have forced me to reconsider.

Yeats believed that the millennia alternate in dominion between East and West, which to him meant an alternation between collective consciousness and free will. Does the terrorists' fury announce the turning away from our emphasis on individual rights toward a time when our group identity will dominate? If so, is there hope for some progress out of this dialectic, or will history endlessly repeat itself? Lacking the metaphysical sources that gave Yeats his vision, we can only wonder. But---at the end of a century that began with high hopes for the improvement of almost everything, lapsed into a blood bath of unheard proportions, and ended with the very fabric of life on the planet in ecological peril---this certainly is a time for reflecting on the trajectory of our civilization.

It is to this task of examination, and self-examination, that Peter Dale Scott lends his poetic talents in the magnificent book-length Minding the Darkness: A Poem for the Year 2000. This work, published a year before the terrorist attack, is the last part of Seculum, a trilogy of book-length poems which includes Coming to Jakarta and Listening to the Candle. For those of us who approached the turn of the century wary of the "passionate intensity" of the revolutionary left but also fed up with the relativism and nihilism of those who "lack all conviction," this poem is tonic indeed.

At a primary level, the darkness referred to in the title is the dark legacy of violence and oppression woven inextricably through human history. The poem is informed by "…the hope / that through understanding // of the darkness around us / we can move towards freedom" (II.viii). But the word minding in the title also invokes Scott's practice of Buddhist mindfulness meditation, and darkness comes to invoke yin, the void or female principle.

One thing that immediately strikes the reader who opens Minding the Darkness is the contrast between two seemingly opposite poetic voices: the poet's unadorned vulnerability and confusion on the one hand, and the astounding scope of his erudition and breadth of subject matter (the bibliography of sources cited in the poem runs twenty-five pages) on the other. Scott is simultaneously a sage and a novice. As it turns out, this is just one of the many contradictions and dichotomies that run through the work. The interplay of these "antinomies" (as Scott calls them in his Afterword): light and dark, good and evil, lyric and epic, masculine and feminine, personal and political, activism and contemplation, reason and intuition, is central to the poem's conception and to the Buddhist-influenced sensibility that underlies that conception.

Scott's Buddhism helps steer his long poem on a middle path between the traditional endpoints of Western thought: the acceptance of faith and humility, on the one hand, or the heroic, and ultimately tragic, search for individual salvation--- "the heroic pursuit of knowledge / that led Odysseus to drowning" (I.iii)---on the other. Scott seems to take as a given Pound's tragic realization at the end of the Cantos (a work to which Minding the Darkness---with its vast scope of references, long passages of economic theory, and moments of startling lyricism---bears more than a passing resemblance) that he cannot make it all cohere. Rather than try to resolve these antinomies in a final synthesis or act of faith, or grieve for some unattainable paradise, the poet simply lets them be, since flux and contradiction are part of the inherent nature of the world. The Buddhist themes are most purely evident in three "retreat poems" interposed between longer sections, which blend self-examination with haiku-like moments of perception:

What lasts?
the streak

of the brown dipper
flying up the streambed

already gone

The poem begins with a personal (as well as collective) disaster---the Oakland Hills firestorm of 1991, in which the poet's home and all of his possessions---"Could this be all our books? / the stove? the refrigerator? // the two sets of china?" (I.i., emphasis in original)---along with "my best political files" (I.ii.) are destroyed. In telling details that reveal Scott's psychological astuteness, we see it is not only the physical loss, but also other people's lack of empathy that is devastating. The poet---driven from the Faculty Club by an insensitive colleague's political denunciation---seeks solace feeding some trusting birds by Strawberry Creek and wonders "Why is it so much harder // to gain the understanding / of friends?" (I.ii, emphasis in original).

The "unaccustomed" vulnerability brought on by the loss of all his possessions opens into one of the main themes of the poem: a compassionate, Buddhist-informed examination of the poet's life as he confronts his childhood, the transitory nature of love, his retirement from teaching, and, at age seventy, mortality. In one poignant passage, the poet, finding himself unable to lift a half-submerged canoe out of the water, realizes how much courage it took for his wife, Ronna, to marry an older man.

Unlike Pound, brought low in the prison camp at Pisa, Scott starts low. The poem moves outward from the poet's vulnerability, as if in concentric circles, to engage the central issues of our time. As the poem zooms out to scan all of human history, it reveals the breadth of the poet's scholarship. To take a randomly chosen example, in discussing the possibility of another age of enlightenment, Scott seamlessly gathers up super string theory, Poe's "Eureka," The Iliad and the Odyssey, a New Yorker article on Rwanda, Kabballa, the alchemy of John Dee and Robert Fludd, Elizabethan poetics, and the origin of Descartes's insights. But always the tone is questioning, personal, free of bombast.

Scott has juggled three careers: poet, left-wing investigative journalist, and university professor. The contradictions between these endeavors is one of the themes that run through the poem. In part III, section xii, he asks:

but if we write poetry
how not to misrepresent
the great conspiracy

of organized denial
we call civilization?

To write or teach poetry is a cultural act, an act that leads the historian/journalist in Scott to question the role of art and culture in a world increasingly run by ruthless capitalists, undercover agents and drug smugglers:

…you could lay prize-winning volumes
of poetry from here to Walnut Creek

and in how many of them
could you find the seminal words
DFS or debt exposure

or even CIA?

At least at this point in the poem, the poet acknowledges that he remains "split-minded."

But Scott is not an academic or purely confessional poet, content to live with the irony of his internal contradictions. He writes that "…we are adrift / in an ocean of non-commitment" (IV.ii) and he is not about to be one more rudderless poet. He demands more of himself, and announces this demand at the beginning of Part IV: "And now for something a bit more serious."

The penultimate section of the book confronts "the simplest truth / the rich are getting richer / the poor poorer" (IV.i, emphasis in original). Scott announces that this section will be "a poem that looks at / the eye in the triangle // above the blunted pyramid" on U.S. currency, symbol of "our current faith / … and its temple the Federal Reserve." (IV.i.). Scott's analysis of the U.S. role in the new world order focuses on the most undemocratic of our institutions, the Federal Reserve Bank and the CIA, and their hidden complicity with the illegal drug trade.

Although I am in sympathy with the need for what Ed Sanders calls "investigative poetry," I found much of the economic theory and analysis of recent history in this section dry. What saves it for me is when Scott turns his reflective gaze back on his own participation in the New Left, especially its excess of revolutionary rhetoric ("revolution as social lobotomy") symbolized by the death of friend and prison lawyer Faye Stender at the hands of a former inmate, and the New Left's disrespect for the basic institutions of democracy, including the seminal thinking of Adams and Jefferson, who Scott cites as guiding thinkers. Here Scott movingly evokes the activist's dilemma: how to confront the range of injustice and abuse without becoming hardened with hatred or vitiated by despair:

It is easy to hate our enemies
who exploit us and pollute our atmosphere
But one must come to see

that there is no "other"
It is greed hatred and delusion
that we need to overcome
(IV.v, emphasis in original)

The last section of the poem, like the last movement of a symphony, recapitulates the twin themes of personal vulnerability and a confrontation with history. The first subsection is an extended love poem to his wife, Ronna, who

…taught me to listen
to the emotions which rest on my heart
like the hushed mists

hanging over this dark September lake
(V.i.)

At age seventy, theirs is inevitably "a love facing death." Here Scott finds consolation in the central Buddhist teaching

of the First Noble Truth
love opening hearts to joy
opens them also to pain

the unloved never experience
for which they are not to be envied
(emphasis in original)

The second subsection of Part V opens with a dream of the poet standing naked and terrified of the height on a fire escape, a dream which, upon waking, he comes to see as symbolic of his fear that his "inadequacy / as the poem begins to finish / getting nowhere final" (V.ii.) lies exposed. Nonetheless, the poet moves tentatively toward some resolution between the personal and the political, asserting that "inner and outer enlightenment / depend on each other // both of them lost / when they are not dialogical." In a statement that foreshadows the terrorist attacks, Scott describes our present moment of "…secular capitalism / and its mimetic offspring /secular communism // facing the theocratic alternative / of shariah and jihad" (emphasis in original). As if speaking to all who are traumatized by the violence unleashed by that clash, Scott asserts that

as the fullness of noon
is the beginning of nightfall
so darkness of experience

is the beginning of insight
(V.iii.)

The core of this insight is the affirmation of a path of the heart. Scott turns to the Kaballah of his wife's Jewish tradition to express the necessary shift from din, the archetype of judgment, to chesed, the archetype of loving-kindness. Both our personal grief and our grief for the fate of all mankind lead us to compassion, and compassion leads us to a middle path between our lofty ideals ("the mind in heaven") and our earthbound reality, where joy is transient and grief inevitable. "…May everyone // experience such breathing / moments" Scott writes of dancing naked with his wife on a moonlit balcony overlooking Lake Como. And then: "…this / now // already gone." It is a kind of lyric blessing on our lives, hemmed in as they are by history and our own mortality.

In my practice as a psychotherapist, I was struck by the dislocation my patients felt as the events of September 11, 2001, shattered their personal worlds of joy and sorrow. "How can l continue to talk about my problems at a time like this?" they seemed to be asking. I recommend Minding the Darkness to all who struggle to make sense of our lives, lived as they are in the twin universes of selfhood and history.

David Shaddock's After Blake won the Ruah Power of Poetry Prize for a chapbook of spiritual poems. His most recent non-fiction books are From Impasse to Intimacy and Contexts and Connections. He practices psychotherapy in Oakland.

 

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